Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Starting to revise


Starting to go back and revise those pieces from the review.
Think it's an improvement so far?

2 comments:

[ad7m] said...

Wow man, huge improvement! You did a great job taking their feedback and making it work.

Michael Prescott said...

It looks better, but I think the bird's too high, though it's beautiful. Feels like it should occupy the centre of the field formed by the strong staff/arm/arm line and the corner of the picture.